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Sweet Dreams...

I wish you sweet dreams, now close those eyes,
Think of sheep jumping through the skies.
In a dream, anything goes,
And what you'll encounter nobody knows.
It could be fairies, goblins and more!
You could even go to 'Lolly Galore!'

Do you like the sound of that?
All you do is lay flat,
and think of the things you will or might,
Encounter in your dreams, good night...

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Hi, I wrote this while laying down on my bed feeling sleepy...
Any helpful notes are greatly appreciated.
THANKS!!!

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  • Flowergirl
    August 21
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    very nice it is to bad not all dreams are like this... the flow is nice i love it


  • dstreetpoet
    August 11
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    a lullaby...

    & very reminiscent of a nursery rhyme... Well done dsp


  • Midnite-Rae
    June 12

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    aww I really like this. i have had insomnia lately. maybe the end part will help.
    beautiful poem. keep up the amazing work. By the way I am bookmarking this


    • Animals
      June 18
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      Thanks

      Awww! Thanks for your comment.
      I rated it 5 stars!!!
      Animals