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pressure

Day by day life passes us by
words said,
mistakes happen,
the pressure builds
its not bad at first
brush it off and live on
day by day life passes by
pressure continues to build
i continue nothing can take me down...
i keep going strong not letting anything touch me
pressure builds like a snow ball down hill
day by day life passes by things keep unfolding
my walls crumble
the pressure builds
its to much i cant do this any more
life passes us by day by day i need a way out
there is no such thing as escaping the pressure
running makes it worse
facing it letting it crush you seems the only way possible
when your under pressure......

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