Listen to the
sound of thy breath
and the rhythm of thy beat...
In the stillness of moment-
floating inside
an effervesce, is an iris
full of gratitude and joy;
it is
the perfection of the divine;
the truest part of thee...
all great magnificence,
in silence; shall be freed.
Author notes
iris~ rainbow
A contest entry
- Prewritten Poems of Perfection by Michael-B.
750 points, ended November 30, 105 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Love It!!!
Beautiful words that are comforting to me right now. Thank You!
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Well written piece
the picture is filled with imaginary thoughts
so clam and relaxed I feel with this pleasureable verse
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A softly written and delicate piece you have etched here
The picture paints a mind
Thank you and best wishes
Julie -
Tranquil and fresh. Nice job!
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lovely
through silence of mind
we are open to embrace life
Thank you for your entry
God bless you my friend...
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loves! mwah! <3 <3 <3
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oh how beautiful, like a little dream..which has come true, i know.
all things in silence are freed to find their own dream as she is too..a flower which grows, unknowing of its beauty but only that it is.
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you remember... you know... there is all of all and all of though...
Bless you ......mmmmmmmmmmauh....
pssst- working on it; Blueberries.bumblebees-
all those far and few between...
eat a melon-
plant thee seeds;
purity; God help us please
amen
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o sweet prayer..i shall repeat it daily..perfect really, as i was just needing a new mantra..
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mauh!!! back at you!
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Ah, you have captured the breath of silence
and created "magnificence."
Superb, Jossie!
M-C
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thankyou, so much!!!! I'm really proud of this one
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