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The Orange Maze

Walls tall and bright
Dead ends at every turn
The color orange in every sight

"I'll take the tickets any day"
The young girl told her friend
She spoke the words with a warming smile
Yet in the maze was trapped in the End.

Her eyes were wide
and told a tale
yet no one looked hard enough to see it

Her eyes yelped "Help!
I'm lost! Get me out!"
But the Maze just swallows her whole.



4-16-09

You can't always trust what is shown on Face Value...

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  • thepoetx69
    July 11, 2009

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    Very creative write here... Nice job. Yet in the maze was trapped in the end was the line that stood out. Although, I love the pic, the text color is alil hard to read for some of us blind folks.... hehehehe.... But I enjoyed reading thi. Thank you


  • xeroabyss II
    June 25, 2009

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    Sounds like the endless frustrated wandering of existance for the ones who have no direction and no one to guide them.