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Don't

Don't ever try to tell me what to do
Trust me you don't wanna see what it gets you
I won't listen and I'll do as I please
If you try to apologise I'll have you begging on your knees =P

Don't ever try to tell me what to say
Cause I'm not gonna listen to you either way
I'm gonna insult who I want to annoy
And there isn't anything you can do about it boy

Don't ever try to say what's on my mind
Cause there is something that you are gonna find
That my mind is my own, and nothing could change that
That is forever true, you got that?

Don't ever try to hold me back
When I'm ready to find the things I lack
I'll be out in the world, and you'll be following close behind
When you're out in the world, it's me you're trying to find

Don't ever try to look down on me
Why are you so convinced and why can't you see?
That I'm not 3 years old; I don't need to hold your hand
Why is this something you refuse to understand?

Don't ever try to tell me how to face my fears
Cause deep down you know you'll be saying it for years
I don't let people tell me how to live
And trying to do so is something I don't forgive

Don't ever tell me how I'm supposed to feel
That is something that makes my mind reel
What makes you think you have the power or right?
Why do you say it if you know it'll start a fight?

Don't let me tell you what to do
Cause I know I have no right to
Don't let my attitude get to you
But if you get used to it, you realise I don't mean to

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  • pineapple-eyes
    August 20

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    I think there is a fine line between being your self but also taking time to stop and listen to other peoples thoughts and opinions, for my part I think it is important that we do that although we have the option not to take that sentiment on board. I like the way you end this write though, very reflective. Best wishes.


  • keepsake
    June 12
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    This is quite long, but I love it. I love the sassy attitude. =]