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In The Secret Place of His Presence *revised

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In the secret place of His presence

My soul delights to hide*

There I know I'm loved*

Near to Jesus precious side

Worldly care's may vex me

 Stormy trials lay me low

Tho' trials and temptation* 

Into His secret place I go

Beneath His gentle wing

There I may find retreat

In that sweet hour*

All becomes more sweet*

He listen's when I'm in-patient*

 My doleful soul He cheer's*

"He say's my peace I give you"

In that secret place of prayer*

Have you been to His secret place?*

He' there to hear your cries*

Beneath His wing there's solace*

For every tearful eye*

 

 

 

Praise God!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • sgking123
    1 day ago
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    good

    God some Lord absorption this ..heart felt and soul merged...you seem to rever and savour the precious words...very few do that with that much devotion endearing all the way and so intense


  • Iron Saint
    October 29
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    Beautiful

    I feel your love for Him in your words. Great is the love which He sheds abroad in our hearts. God bless you Sister. Love James


  • grampabob1946 silver member
    October 22

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    Another beautiful poem from your pen!
    Yes, I pray all day long for our sinful world and that I am obeying Jesus.
    What a friend we have in Jesus!
    It is a cold October night out here on the wind-swept plains of Nebraska. The stray cats are fed. I am at the kitchen table and our pet rabbits are looking out the windows.They like to look outside even though they can't see anything in the dark. We have just returned from a prayer meeting.
    I have to say your poem has warmed me considerably.
    Jesus bless your and your fine pen!!!


  • sgking123
    September 9

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    wow

    I am speechless for words.I guesss you had to think about this
    for a long time because such imagery does not occur soon enough. T
    Thanks for this beautifully written piece.Please go through
    my latest You Gonna Like it.There are more if you like

  • Mykael
    September 7
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    this is an excellent poem,
    great job


  • darlee77 gold member
    August 20
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    I love the message. I do in all the poems you write. You are a true witness for our Lord. God bless.


  • cybilseyes silver member
    June 18
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    Personally I find it hard to connect with religious writes.. but that's just me.. I think spirituality is a hard thing to pen and to connect with someone elses is even harder... nice flow though it did get a bit choppy toward the end it has a pleasant feel to it so good work.
    xo
    Cyb

  • This poem was written very well.
    Very good job.
    I did not see any part that needed to be fixed.
    Good and Intriuging read!

    (I hope I spelt Intriuging right)

    TrueBlueWriter..

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