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Dear M

Dear "M",

I haven't known you long, yet I feel like I have.
I haven't spent alot of time with you in person,
yet I feel as though you're always there.
I think about you quite often, even if I don't want to.
You probably see me as some 19 yr old kid that you used
to be like when you were younger, but I see you
as a man, full of intelligence, fun, happiness.
With you I can be what I want to be, with you I can chat
for hours.  We can have your childish conversations, we can have our, deep, meaningful & intelligent conversations.

You're the one I'm scared to be rejected by, you're the one I want to
be with, no matter what distance, no matter what age difference there maybe.

I really really like you, I wish I had the guts to ask you to be mine.
I joke about asking you but never properly ask.

So...Will you be mine?

Love,
The girl that you will probably never see.
x

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  • Bob Fox
    June 23

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    my

    The beauty and innocence of youth. And no greater compliment can another from afar recieve then the sweet flattery of another. well done young poet.


    • Karlie67
      June 23

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      Wow...thank you...your comment is really really sweet thank you so much, it really has made my day a whole lot better.


  • Jayde1
    June 21
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    awwwww

    this is lovely....tho if ya never ask u will never know......a great write


    • Karlie67
      June 21
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      Thank you very much Glad you found it okay. Sadly I could never ask...he is many years older than me..hehe.

  • mcfreeman
    June 13
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    such an out pouring....

    honesty flows


  • his kiss
    June 12
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    i love it! great texture!

    • Karlie67
      June 12
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      Aww thanks, it's a letter to someone I really like, but they will never read this hopefully hehe! Thanks for the comment x

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