Feeling entitled
to someone else's pleasure
Unhappy with self
A contest entry
- Jealousy has a capital J by cazzy71.
415 points, ended June 20, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is well done indeed plus being a fine analysis! Congrats!
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Excellent Haiku. I admire anybody who can write this form and you have certainly nailed it 
Well penned and good luck
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thankyou for entering
Thank you for your entry,Quick jerky write that fitted brief perfectly.Do you often write in this format? Its interesting and works so well. I feel you could enter my other contests,about regret,listed in feelings,and ends 26th June.
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I have been writing a lot of haikus lately, they fascinate me for some strange reason. Thank you very much and I have already entered into your other contest
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Haikus
I cannot write them with enough feeling,I think its skillful to get correct,and you manage it perfectly.
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