As I walk away rolling my eyes
I take a deep breath and feel all your lies
They caress my skin like you've done before
I shudder, suddenly feeling a whore
How could you have done this to me?
How many of your own flaws do you see?
Tired of the masked lies you flaunt
I feel like it's me you wish to taunt
So now where do we go from here?
Want to be so far away yet so near
Addicted to the false truths you speak
You come near, I'm once again weak
I slap myself for being the fool
You're using me; I'm some kind of tool
I have lost even unto myself -- yet again
Falling for you; stuck in this sin
Author notes
again; fictional...
I don't usually rhyme, but for this piece I felt I needed to... I hope it didn't come out too forced.
A contest entry
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Comments
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I'm not sure how to comment, not that it's not good, but for the label as being fictional. You make it sound so real, but guessing it could be just a part of concealment to part of the past. Either way I think it was filled with emotion and written with flair. I want to thank you for your entry into the following contest: "Already On My Favorites."
Ted E
PS: Your entry has been blessed by the three wise clappers, but don't spend the whole nine points in one place(lol)!
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Wow, I love this write; I can really relate.
Thankyou so much for entering this piece in my contest, and I wish you the best of luck!
♥ Maria ♥
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