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Thirsty Rain

The beauty of rain is captured in this moment.
The thirsty grass gets greener.

The beauty of rain is captured in the sky.
A rainbow slowly appears.

The beauty of this scene is the rain.
It sustains us all.

Thirsty raindrops tumble in to the sea.
Even the rain is thirsty.

Author notes

Picture taken from: http://ftp.gnome.org/pub/GNOME/teams/art.gnome.org/backgrounds/NATURE-AnotherGrass_1600x1200.jpg

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  • Lanasaur
    October 24

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    I really enjoyed reading this. A lovely healthy poem it is. Beautiful words
    Lana


  • MysteriousWhisper
    June 22

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    i love how you took the prompt and made it much bigger than it actually is! it just breathes life into the image and makes it seem like it is the most important thing in the world! really great ideas! great job i loved this one! good luck in the contest!


  • daviscth silver member
    June 16

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    You have great imagery in this poem. I could feel and taste the rain drops. Thanks for taking time to share it.

  • silver-girl
    June 12

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    I love the picture--it's so pretty!! And the poem matches the picture--soft, gentle, expressive. I really liked this!!