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I love her : )

With all my heart I love this girl

So beautiful with her black curly hair

I love her voice its so amazing

Her sexy smile drives me crazy

When she laughs I feel so high

Its weird how fast time goes by

When im just talking to her about

Nothing and everything

When her brown eyes look into my green

I dont care about anything

All I know is what I feel

And damn it feels really real

From the day we met I hoped shed be mine

And now I have her to give all my time

The way she is is just so perfect

I would do anything for her

To have her smile at me its worth it

Out of all the guys, she wants me

Wow I am soo lucky  : )
Ive hurt and suffered because of her

But thats okay its all over : )

I felt like Ive died and gone to heaven

Ill never forget how we met on day eleven

When we first kissed

It was pure bliss

I remembered when our lips first touched

Even then I loved you so much

This poem may not be long

But remember, I'm blonde

You have made me the happiest guy alive

When we met on month number five

I love you so much and I never want this to end

Your my everything and my best friend

You are my heartbeat and without you I cannot live

So to you all my love I give

The bestest way I like to spend my day

Is hanging out with a girl named *** : )

I love you ************ with all my heart

Author notes

I love this girl so much : ) she told me to star out her name tho
Keep in mind that this is like the second poem i have ever written

Do you think my gf will like it?

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  • ColdHeartedChick
    September 23

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    yes she likes it lol...

    its an amazing poem seriously ! i love it!! but like star out my name haha cuz i dont like it in the poem.. it looks weird..


  • B.Love
    June 22
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    This was very well written, love it


  • whoudini
    June 15

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    This was very well written and yes she will not like it but love it.

    This is a,s a romantic poem that i have seen in a long while and this had heart put into it and i think if I could still write poems like this, it would not be as well as you did this and thanks was a motivater and well thanks for the great read and will look forward to more of your works.


  • Erica Carnea
    June 13

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    Aww This Is Soo Sweet
    I Love:
    'This poem may not be long
    But remember, I'm blonde'
    Its Great
    Keep Penning
    Love Always
    Erica xx

  • awww this is so sweet i know she'll like it!


  • Dog Tag
    June 13

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    dude she will love it! you added so many things to this poem. Love, romance comedy! I have to hand it to you! This is great! Nicely done man! Amazing work of yours! I presume she will enjoy reading. I’m sure she will love this.

  • yes she will like it very much

  • aww how sweet

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