Come and walk with me
Down by the river.
When your life is full of darkness
I will be your light.
Shimmer on the surface
Of the swiftly rushing river.
Sing your love for me and
I will hear your heart.
Come and walk with me
Down by the river.
Let our souls fly
I will be your guide.
Our hearts combine
In soft surrender
To the flame
That melts us together.
Come and walk with me
Down by the river.
Share with me the night.
Love in liquid light.
What did you think?
Comments
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Melodic
The melody in the poem is hypnotic.... takes the reader along with you on the walk... well written... the last three verses are stronger than the first two... making the first two more specific will make them stronger I think... Good luck
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I loved the imagery.
This was beautiful.
You did an amazing job.
Keep up the awesome work.
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