With you, I am luminary
Without you, I am not even:
One.
In you, we are an infinite coupling
Into you, we are implicitly love.
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Because I'm in love, with life; Everything about it.
Written March 18th, 2004
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Great small poem, full of deep feelings. Nice writen.
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i am still, in love with this piece.
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A softer side indeed. What a lovely piece.
Anna -
It's amazing how some writing can write such powerful and emotionals words in such a small poem, just like you did here. Excellent job, thanks for entering!
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Timeless I'm stealing it.
Horus - this I shit you not is one of the most moving things i've read - perioud ! -
Thank you, John.
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Horus8, this was such a lovely piece. I have read quite a few from you in the past, but this one is by far one of my favorites. You combine complexity and simplicity so well within the lines. Nicelt done.
~ John
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...Swoon...
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excellent!
gate crushing memories came in unwelcomely upon stumbling at this one... full of sweet and bitter moments... thanks for sharing this one... keep it up!!!
-mayie
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It's better now,
my precious dark swan,
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i come back to this one often.
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Whole lot of lovvvee
I saw some remarks that they didn't know you had this side
Odd huh that we all have this in us just depends on when we want to show it is all
Really this was special and I loved it
Pen on sweets
Love n hugs
Susan~~~
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hi...just me...
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GEEZZZ..if I was twenty years younger..I'd fall in love with you myself..just to hear words like these written straight from the heart.. hmmmmmm.. think I'll go look for a toy boy
nicely done nephew.. 
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Simply beautiful. This is a soft Horus8, I didn't know you had that side.
I prefer it a little harder..
Sweet lines, deep spiritual love.
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Ah yes.... this shows the softer horus i like to see.
Beautiful. It speaks volumes in its simplicity.
I enjoyed.
Ann -
I like this. It captures that deep kind of spiritual love some of us are lucky enough to find...the first line could constitute a poem in its own right...
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Feeling a wholelottalove out there eh? I love you soft....no where is my martini...
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Yeah, thats pretty sweet and sappy. Liked it though. Short and to the point. Almost an ephiphany like quality.
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nice soft horus8
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sigh......
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That's so sweet. You really do have a softer side. That's really cute.
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I thoughts are very deep and I think you must be a very passionate person.
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There is a softer horus8, I have witnessed his presence before, and here it is again. This is beautiful!
Rene
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mmm...i have to say. this is one of my favorites of yours.
it is simple, elegant, graceful, and so chalk fulla emotion that it's a little frightning.
quiet beautiful my sweet.
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A very deep meaning poem for such few words. Great write, keekp up the good work!
Good is blessing you
With Christian Love,
Dawn
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