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anger pain and fear
they seem to hide deep in shadows
the shadows of love and happiness
behind every "i love you"
is the agony of regret
behind every "i miss you"
is a memory of sufficating pain
concealed before every "i need you"
is the guilty thought of a possible lover
and hidden in each "goodbye"
is the silent prayer that its not forever...

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  • this is an excellent poem you wrote here...

    it has a lot of Ironic truths in it...for we can not love
    unless we are willing to be vulnerable...
    and in being vulnerable expose our hearts to possible
    pain...

    may you never fear the pain of love
    for the heart is a muscle and grows each time
    stronger when we love.

    ears/Seattle

    now...who we pick is up to us... a disaster
    or an adventure awaiting the growth of our hearts!