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her [.smile.] still shines so bright♥

ii'm going to pretend you, **
were never here. by the way you h u r t me and made me c r y.


ii'm going to [forget] you ever came up to me on that r a i n i n g night.
the pain you caused me to go through;

[.i never want to see you again.]
i just want you gone. you were never in my l i f e .

as far as my brown eyes can r.e.a.d --
you never were in [♥] with me.

 

as far as my timid smile can **shine;**

this little girl, she's not yours anymore.

[.shesmine.]

 

don't you D-A-R-E try to touch her again;;!

she's +mine+; can't you hear?

don't try to take her, she loves me.

she will [[never]] know who you are.

 

you aren't a father.

    you're a jerk

         you're immature

              [.growup.]

if you ever want to see her again

    [♥]

 

Author notes



My baby's "father" trying to take her away from me. It hasn't happened yet, *knock on wood*, hopefully it never will.

{pleaseletmeknowHOWbaditsucks}

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  • This poem is fantastic, I am in awe of your writing. I only wish that you would continue to write, it's not just a pen to a paper, it's letting out all of the emotion that gets bottled up.


  • ladybug.
    June 11

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    This is pretty awesome sis. So much for not posting on here anymore, eh? It's really amazing though! Don't worry, he wouldn't dream of coming near Cissy. I doubt he'd even claim her.
    I love you<3 see you soon.


  • Antebellum
    June 11
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    this is really good.

    I really like the take of this quote.
    thanks for entering.