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Heaven Is

Heaven is
Paradise

Heaven is
Shangri-la

Heaven is
Nirvana

Heaven is
Known by many names

Heaven is
Your dreams fulfilled

Heaven is
The ultimate destination

Heaven is
Love

Heaven is
Filled with dogs

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  • mackers1
    June 11
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    dfgs

  • mackers1
    June 11

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    very good but a little weid about that last line heavn is full of dogs its good but you should at least say doggys