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Twilight Mystery

Elegant darkness,
she is poetry walking
through quantium leaps.

 

Could the end be the begin-
ning, as twilight mystery
trailed the galaxies?

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Prompt : Picture and 23 wds.

Wds used:22

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  • The Fun House silver member
    August 10

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    Beautiful and very moving. I like the images this leaves in my mind and the fact that it leaves me pondering your words, which a great thing indeed. Excellent piece of poetry.

    • haley27
      August 11
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      Thank you

      Thank you for the wonderful comment given to my poem. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Haley27


  • whoudini
    June 15

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    Proof that a few words can say a lot of things.

    You really did well with this and all the things you can think of, when you read this once , twice or three times , well now see why this won a reward and thank was a interesting write and look forward to read more of you works.


  • Midnite-Rae
    June 11
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    "Elegant darkness,
    she is poetry walking"
    I really liked the first two lines.
    Keep on writing.

    • haley27
      June 12
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      Thank you

      Thank you for the wonderful comment. I'm glad you liked those lines. Haley27


  • islekine gold member
    June 11

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    I'm counting 22 words...

    Well penned...thanks for entering! sorry for delay...
    Best wishes always!

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