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When I die too

When the stone is removed from your lips
And all the stars' truths revealed,
We'll chew the myths of gods
And refill our cups until
There's not a tassel of doubt
Or a strong wind left
To cloud our hopeless words,
To steal our broken names.

And our ages will not cry against one another
The shrill of metal birds.
For, I still believe we can reconcile
The complexity of one moment
From every other--

Piece by piece,
We'll lay them like tile
Into some future.
What, if anything but
Some passing of time?

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  • sheltered
    June 17
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    powerful...
    damn fine