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Non -Consensual Orgy

Dad & his boys get drunk every night
So, they take turns, that ain't right
Taking her violently against her will
They have to wear condoms, she's not on the pill
She's a young, beautiful, high spirted girl
They just laugh as they destroy her world
She sits in her room afraid to go to sleep
Because sooner or later they will start to creep
She cries out and tries to be strong
What they do to her is so very wrong
She has to lie and pretend she is free
For each night she performs....A Non - Consensual Orgy

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"ONCE USED AND ABUSED"

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  • sahdana
    June 21
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    well-done

    well-done in presenting some realities-with a VERY authentic voice...wow... Many try to avoid this topic-but this piece struts the truth and the issue and message screams for attention as "she"-someone's mother, sister, daughter, friend... seeks freedom-great title and this is surely a WINNER...All the best to you!

  • oh god. this is chilling and messed up.
    I hope to god this isnt a true story, or if it is, the girl is slowly being freed from regret and bad memories.
    Very good write.
    Thank you so much for entering =)

  • pearlstp
    June 16
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    Emotional

    Among the more vicious acts are the ones done in animalistic temper; even so God sees it all.

  • J Macabre gold member
    June 11

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    That hideous...raises such hostile feelings in me. People like that should be drown in their own blood.