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I hope your happy

I hope your happy
Now that you broke my heart
Are you truly happy
Tearing me apart?

Cause if you are
Go ahead and tear
Your happiness means everything to me
So my life I will spare

No matter what you say
Or even what you do
I can't make myself
Stop loving you

You took my heart
Why not take my soul?
Now that I don't have you,
Death will take it's toll.

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  • Trapped Destruction
    June 11

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    ok. I have def been here. U have to remember that u r still a person who deserves life even when it feels like a part of u is missing as if there's a void n ur heart. Be safe.

    • X ShatteredSoul X
      June 11
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      Thank you, but what did you think of the poem?? lol


      • Trapped Destruction
        June 11
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        I think it is written well in style and context. I loved it really. The way it goes together and pulls together all the feeling into it is probably the best part that I like.