I put my trust in you
After just a couple days
Then you went and broke it
In so many ways
You said to trust you
So I fucking tried
You said you loved me
And you fucking lied
Yet the love in my heart
Is still there for you
And it tears me apart
Cause you don't feel it too
You said you did
Another fucking lie
Well now you can't be mad
When i fucking die
I can't trust manys truth
So why in the world would I
Put my trust in you
And believe your every lie?
It's time for me to end this now
And never say a word
About how you were the reason
i chose to leave this world.
What do you think??
Comments
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I don't know you, but i do know some of my friends have tried suicide... don't, it just causes more pain and hurt. Find a way to let it out without dying. I hope things get better for you...


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From A Friend.
I agree with her in saying Don't try to kill yourself but other than that it seems to be a very well written poem. You might want to get a professional opinion cause mine aren't going to do much.
You can talk to me anytime you want, I'm always here for you.
P.s Theres always somone who is willing to help you and will be badly effected if you do kill yourself, So don't! Always think before you act.
Have a good day.
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PLEASE DON'T KILL YOURSELF!!
Just because somebody broke your heart doesn't mean you need to kill yourself!! please, please don't!!! there are other ppl that care please don't kill your self!!! you can always talk to somebody about this it doesnt have to be that way

