You might not know it but i'm in love
With the most amazing boy
When our eyes meet
My heart threatens to burst out of me
For his eyes are blazing sapphires
Bright and Blue and Beautiful
His raven black hair
The finest silk, i long to touch
His lips are pink rose petals
I crave to taste
He's my ray of sunshine
His smile lights up my world
When he's happy
No one's happier than me
As long as he laughs
My heart will soar
And i will feel alive
Though he's not mine to keep
I'm content to watch him from a distance
At times i struggle to hide the love i feel
But i must
For i cannot lose him
You might not know it but i'm in love
With the most amazing boy
But sshhh...
Don't tell him
Coz he will never love me too
Author notes
i'll keep you my dirty little secret, dont tell anyone or you'll be just another regret
sorry i know this is rushed, i plan to work on it...
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Beautiful
Beautiful and heartfelt, just the way I like them.
Since I'm an English nazi, I just want to mention the first word in the eleventh line. I can only dream that I could meet a girl who would feel this way about me. I can't wait to read more of your work.
DarkMaster
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ooooooh! first word in the eleventh line..i get it
tankoo
oops..
soz hitler, shall i use the proper lingo?
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Awe thats so sweet
~Oka -
wow...i love that song (woo) and this is an amazing piece, i loved every word and it fits together really well, beautiful and it really captured me....
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