He looked deep and thoughtfully into the pond deep depths,
Her laughing hazel-blue-brown-black-green eyes,
In their shining oval reflection, he sought her songing-soul.
It asked, are You the man, who sees the woman I want to be?
Her partially opened, rose pink lips, seemed to pulsate rhythmically,
Like the beat of ancient drums, and the sounds of love physical.
They had been together, closer to forever, sharing chaste kisses and warm hugs,
Hearts chafing, their feelings for each other ever deepening...
"Can I make love to you, Pretty Lady?", he had to ask finally.
Her twinkling orbs widened in answer, as her sweet full lips,
Softly, willingly, beguilingly said, "yes you can."
Dance-flushed faces grew closer together, as planets are drawn to the sun.
Two mouths gently collided; lips trembling in long withheld excitement,
Brushing softly together in eagerness and desire.
They could both feel that sensation, one whispering secretly into an ear.
Long strong arms reached round to embrace her wholly,
Ivory white fingers pulled insistently at the back of his well muscled neck.
Lips joined tighter together, and he could feel her pillow soft,
And pliant, full scoops pressed against his wildly beating heart.
His own Carmel chips hardened in response to their undulating caress.
Tips of tongues gently lashed, fluttering silk scarves in a hot desert wind.
Inhaling slowly, her strawberry and pineapple breath , sighed-deeply- into, himself.
The banana split scent of her intoxicated him like an exotic love potion,
She swooned, passionate breath stolen, made her giddy with pleasure.
Slowly, he undid the fastening about her, gently tugging down, around her waist.
Blood raced in his veins, disbelieving eyes drank in the sight,
Her satiny white creams, strawberry chips perfect, in imperfection.
His tender kisses travelled down her face, her long lovely neck,
Purposefully pursing his lips gently, tuggingly,
Sending ting-tingles of desire, down her-everywhere.
She urgently undid him, exposing his masculine chest,
Tracing long lines through soft hairs, making him shiver with passion.
He nimbly caressed her beautiful scoops, lowering his head to taste them.
She sighed, he ran trembling-man-lips, over cherry-topped rosebuds,
Nudging and kneading, the sweetest mounds in wonder.
She pressed his head against her blush-warmed bosom,
In the shadowy light, of moon-touched night, dancing lovers knew,
They'd found the perfect recipe for a banana split...
Author notes
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A contest entry
- ...Elements of Ecstasy... by Desire.
1221 points, ended June 15, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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contest page is showing I did not comment
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Thank You!
Thank You for Your entry: Splits
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and after reading several times ~
I'm Honored also Humbled You took the time to pen for my contest
You took the prompt and brought forth much for the Mind to feast upon~
Bravo!! When I digest words written, images come through that grab hard~
Woven Strengths: This made me hungry
I realized- had an epiphany that I was missing the dessert of living la vida loca~ several times I inhaled
Your words and drool just overtook me~ even mapquested nearest Dairy Queen for a banana split with clothes on of course
Now when I got to this part- I was drinking excitedly- "Can I make love to you, Pretty Lady?", he had to ask finally.
and out my nose came my drink~ for a man to be bold to ask; my jaw dropped~ and images flooded my Mind- reminded me of that movie with Sharon Stone- Basic Instinct~ and a sequel she did When I have a drink shoot out~ that is a 
Love the imagery also the weaving of words- Very unique ~ satiates the Hunger
While reading I kept seeing a very *intimate* shower scene however just the woman as I would say in a very delicate position up against the glass
walls~
Hopefully my comment to Your write makes sense
Powerful verse and message You have brought forth
These words grabbed and pulled~
Tips of tongues gently lashed, fluttering silk scarves in a hot desert wind.
Inhaling slowly, her strawberry and pineapple breath , sighed-deeply- into, himself
Vivid Imagery poured in these lines...
Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Voice
also best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
Many blessings too 
with much love and light~ Desire~*~
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Thank you very much, Desire, I have always asked...I am flattered by your response...she's not a fatal attraction kind of girl though, my brother dates those...heh heh.
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Whew~ that is good to hear
Your poor brother
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Oh my, reads better than a romance novel Well done!
Good luck in the contest!
Linda
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Thanks Linda, it's long in tooth alright
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