I look at her now, she changed even more,
I can't believe she was my friend- she looks like a whore.
She use to be cool, she use to be nice,
but now shes a slut, her heart is made of ice.
She wears too much makeup, she says too many swears,
she wears a thong instead of normal girl underwear.
She is only 12, she looks so bad,
I still can't see how I was her friend, and that's just sad.
I feel kind of mean, for talking behind her back,
but she wouldn't notice, she's too high on crack.
Oh who cares, she use to be my friend,
but I was never hers, if she said so, it was pretend.
She lied to me, she told everyone my secrets.
She has a bunch of new friends that all look like faggots.
She seemed so real- but she is so fake,
being friends with her was a big mistake...
Do you relate?
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yes I relate to this one and I hate all sluts it's sad when they turn that way at only 12 though damn...
Great write
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Oh wow. I can relate to this one too. I absolutly loved the rhyming scheme you got going on in this poem. There was one part I liked that made me giggle " I feel kind of mean, for talking behind her back,
but she wouldn't notice, she's too high on crack." I don't know why it made me giggle, I guess I was just thinking of my Ex friend and how whore-ish she is.
But if your ex-friend is only 12 and dressing like a slut, that's pretty bad, kids should know better these days. Dressing like that won't get you no where .. except maybe a one night stand, which is also terrible.
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I don't relate,,,,but it pains me to think of loosing ANY friend,,,sooooo your pain is felt by me,,,
sorry to hear and feel your pain,,,, true friendship is rarer than rare,,, but something SOOOOO worth searching out,,,, thanks for sharing,,, a pleasure to read,,, -
Gee, dunno who you're writing *this* one about....
Excellent. =]
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YAY!
Thank you, you're awesome!!!
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