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A New Day Coming

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Change is coming, feel wind on my cheek
Blowing far far away my sad losing streak
Captured for a moment my forever dream
Seen in sky of blue and buttermilk cream

My fields of daisies and he loves me not
Along with the heartache shall be forgot
For a new day is dawning as hope arises
Filled with happiness and other surprises

A day like no other our Lord has created
His words of love and hope translated
God gives us choices to find a new day
We can accept or squander it all away

My sadness past shall not be repeated
With hope and faith tears are conceded
Smile once hidden now comes into view
God's precious love makes us brand new

So walk in the garden and feel the breeze
Here the sound of hope in rustling leaves
Times are changing for the better you see
Through the love of God pain is set free


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http://playingforchange.com/

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  • Jesann gold member
    June 12

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    Inspirational.
    A lovely poem you have penned here.
    Wonderful thoughts & faith.
    Well done.


    • Sandygram silver member
      June 14
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      Thank You

      I appreciate the lovely coment. Thank you for stopping by. Always a pleasure. Take care, Sandy

  • Papagallo
    June 12
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    Beauthful words and so true. May you do well in the contest.


    • Sandygram silver member
      June 14
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      Good Morning Papagallo

      Thank you for the nice comment. It is always nice to hear from my friend. Hugs and smiles.

      Have a blessed day, Sandy


  • Midnite-Rae
    June 11

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    I'm not very fond of change, but you did an amazing job with this poem. I loved your imagery and the rhyme. You always write such beautiful poem.
    Keep up the fantastic work mom!


    • Sandygram silver member
      June 14
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      Thank you dear daughter. Your comment is lovely and brings me a smile. Hugs to you.

      Blessing, Mom

  • Beautiful words of truth you write...

    • Sandygram silver member
      June 14
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      Thank you for stopping by and reading , I so appreciate the lovely comment. Take care, Sandy


  • poet2angels gold member
    June 11

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    This is so beautiful!
    Flawless rhyme and flow but mostly the touching feeling it brings to the heart...
    Ty for entering!

    Lynda

    • Sandygram silver member
      June 14
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      Lovely Coment

      Thank you for the lovely comment. Take care, Sandy

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