Mom I dont know what to do
I'm always confused
lost in shades of blue
battered beyond bruised
Mom there is so much to say
I had high hopes in dreams
that have all turned grey
sliced severed seams
Mom that is all I can see
escape in forests of rain
where my soul is free
carefree can't complain
Mom I feel older then my years
entangled with natures life
are my neverending tears
soul spearing strife
Mom the world is crying too
poison, evict, desimate
torture, rape and stew
lessons learned late
Mom who turns hearts cold?
creates monsters of decay
without a soul to hold
pretend people play
Mom I need to find serene
the walls are to high
to recapture my dream
forget forever fly.
Comments
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Stunning piece of work here. Very very dark and yet it is beautifully-written and heartfelt too. Keep it up.
Dark Wishes
Wayne Leon
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Wow, that was deep...
Soft innocense & tender thoughts laced with a profound emotional depth that made for a powerful piece of writing...
Impressive as always...
Keep up the good work...
Well done!!!
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Sweet , vulnerable,
sad and full of raw emotion
that moved me,
as I found a pieces of my heart
in your words...
Needless to say, I love it!
Thank you for sharing
~Pastel
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harsh reallity
like pages ripped from the book of life...
superbly dark but only in the bubbles that ooze to the surface...
in other words great write
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