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The Couch Potato

As I woke up with nothing but free time to work with
Laziness was what i first emphasized on...
It is such a vast topic of research,you see!
laying around just doing nothing,
Ah!what a frame to fit into..

But,as always its not an blessing that I have received
and its not at all durable
Oh! I wish it could be so...

As though waking me from my death,
the cell starts to ring.
I know its something that will make make me
jump from the bed,switch off the television
get dressed up,all because its a call of duty...

Its something that comes after an interval
but,i tell you! when it strikes,there's not a hiding place left on earth
The call of duty is not what you guessed it to be.
For the easy go lucky people like me
the dictionary meaning is, something which makes us move around!
In circles,in quadangels or any angle or shape you can think of
Its just  like some unpalatable food for us!

So,the story begins with me getting the deadly call
there are a dozen things I have to do in two hours!
What do I do?
I have an important decision to make here people!
Its two hours of television after the month of exams I have had
or two hours of unending work.
The earlier option doesn't need any thinking, doest it?
Oh!well I am so getting a headache now;an imaginative one nonetheless.



the cell rings again,




"hey mom,I think am down with a fever"
it always does work

laying around  on my couch
to watch my favorite program


who said we don't have work to do?


where's my remote anyways???





Author notes

OK!!!! I have written something after a months gap and this is what i have come up with....Its not really agenre I have focussed on and i really think this one here needs a lot of patch up...please help me through if you find some errors or anything you feel is out of order...
thanks

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  • X-Elmo-X
    June 12
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    i really enjoyed reading this
    thanks for sharing
    cya
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