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This Way and That

Let go of my arms
I need myself for this
Please don't make it more difficult
then it already is

This way or that way?
my head's turned upside down
I can't look up straight and think
if you keep turning me around

This way and that way
Which is the right way?
I fear I'll go down a one way
because I don't know these streets..

Author notes

To the lady who created the contest, I've gone through the same thing and I hope you find your way. Whichever choice you make will be the right one.

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  • PedestrianX
    June 14

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    I fear I'll go down a one way
    because I don't know these streets..

    I Loved these lines
    Very good alicia