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At last...

At last...
sensual translations

flood her smile,

while
yesterdays innocent posture
pleads with each arch
closer...she sways,
lathering a new found drip.

Pulse lost and enchanted  
within lucid reruns, 
those latent fingerprints
lingering upon skin,

 

he must soon bare...

Author notes

"No, I don't think I will kiss you,
although you need kissing, badly.
That's what's wrong with you.
You should be kissed and often,
and by someone who knows how. "

.....said to Scarlett by Rhett...Gone with the Wind

LOL see what ya did... you made me get all romantic

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  • penman gold member
    June 18
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    Excellent

    Another amazing write. So very descriptive and well done. Congratulations on the bronze.


  • Pure Thought silver member
    June 11
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    Just Fn awesome... LOL
    Amazed the trophy isn't melted.


  • Cannonsfire
    June 11

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    lol And how could that movie not make you all mushy...the strong woman, the stronger man and a civil war..yep had it all and so does this poem C


  • Three Doves
    June 11

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    Your sensuality is always a pleasure to read my friend... You're making me think of you in ways I shouldn't be thinking of you Congrats on the award. Your talent is a treasure....
    Pa Pa...


  • Swan song gold member
    June 11

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    wow!!!! this is nothing less then sensational of course you are that!!! excellent word usage rich as chocolate cake and so good i wont be able to spell right for a week


  • Cup-a-Joe
    June 11

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    ~~Pulse lost and enchanted
    within lucid reruns,
    the latent fingerprints
    lingering upon skin~~ OK I am stealing this. If you see it in a poem with my name- I will swear it'mine.

    Joe


  • Daizee silver member
    June 11

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    lathering a new found drip
    whoa.. steamy... lol...

    Excellent take on the quote


  • sweet arrival gold member
    June 11

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    awww.. SOOO romantic and soft. i really liked this.
    'lathering a new found drip' oooooo
    congrats on the bronze.


  • Hope Angel silver member
    June 11

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    Aw this is beautiful. Loved it. Good luck in the contest and thank you for the comment on my poem


  • CrystalLizard
    June 11

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    I love the sensual tension you've built with your word choice—NICE!! The first stanza sucked me right in, and I love the way the final ellipsis marks footprints into imagination. Lovely enchantment here. Good luck!


  • DeJaBlue gold member
    June 11

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    Oooooo.....I likey This is very romantic and just...ahhhh. Great take on the prompt. Thank so much for entering.

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