Waiting, time is no allie of mine
Days drift along without a show
Anxiously hoping for a sign
My fear doth now begin to grow
Grasping at a passer-bye
Like a junky seeking a fix
Wanting to gain my hearts high
Feelings, a jumbling mix
Last time has gone, now it’s past
Like years, yet less then a week
“The world’s a stage,” I search the cast
Not finding the one whom I seek
A face, a name, a dream pf dreams
Anguishing despair at our separation
In sleep, none is as it seems
Her image, only an apparation
I wait for her to call my name
A slave in shackles self-made
But in my heart, tis all the same
If it ensures her smile won’t fade
So ever still I sit here waiting
And watch the hoard go out the door
No second thoughts, nor self-debating
I’ll sit here and wait for her some more.
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Comments
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"Waiting" can be very time consuming for many things and can be even more so when it comes to hearts. I know I have been there a few times and it can be an emotional roller coaster. I want to thank you for your entry into the following contest: "To Be Put On My Favorites List."
Ted E
PS: Your entry has been blessed by the three wise clappers, but don't spend the whole nine points in one place(lol)!
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Wow this was Awesome my favorite part was,,,
"Grasping at a passer-bye
Like a junky seeking a fix
Wanting to gain my hearts high
Feelings, a jumbling mix"
Great write and thank you for entering my contest
Good luck
♪ -♥Amy♥
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thanx
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This is flat out sad. The emotion, the feeling you put into this just floored me. I have to admit, I have felt like this a time or two, and you have penned the feeling perfectly! wonderful write!
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