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Forever Dead

My Headphones in my ears,

Only serving one purpose,

To keep me from crying,

To keep me from everyone,

To let me die, second by second, song by song,

 

I stare at you all laughing,

It makes me sick,

My eyes are blue; wrong

Look closer, they're bloodshot to the core...

 

I'm dying yes; wrong again,

I'm already dead,

And as i look around,

My Deathtrack blasting through my head,

All of you mouthing Shit to one another,

I wonder; Is this hell,

because i know one thing for sure,

 

I'M DEAD and this is MY HEAVEN...

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  • SuffocateTheSorrow
    July 12
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    This is really good, I like it lots

  • my desolate soul
    July 12
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    this is a great poem,i can relate to it a lot


  • xxxfallen angelxxx
    July 12
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    thats really good. wats *bunny* mean?


  • KatherineAnne
    July 8

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    I can relate all too well. My music, other than my poetry is virtually all I need to not feel so hopeless. I really enjoyed this.
    Thank you for your entry piece and goodluck in the contest.

    -Kati


  • amberrr.
    July 5

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    ...

    This is exactly how i feel, almost hopeless, i don't even know what to say. Sometimes living is horrible, but you just have to endure it, even when you feel like it's better to just leave. Hold in there. Again thanks for commenting my poem.


  • Fallen-Thumper
    June 23
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    wow. i loved every word of this. amazing and i hope your ok....


  • angelfalls.silently
    June 16

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    awesome.

    "my eyes are blue;wrong look closer there bloodshot to the core" that was my favorite part. this is deffinatly on my list of fav poems.


  • Indigo.Wishes x
    June 11
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    This is my fault..

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