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How can you

How can you act
Like nothing's wrong

How can you feel
Something that's not there

How can you love
With deciet on your tongue

How can we survive
When you don't care

Please tell me what you think

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  • Silent Cougar Moderators member
    June 22

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    Glad to see you got back on ok, and are getting back to writing.
    This one is full of short, strong, but powerfull words, and ones everyone who has felt the same can relate to perfectly.
    You did a great job on this, well done.


  • Sector-Hunter silver member
    June 11

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    This is short but says a lot. ummm you are still feeling hurt, I hope things get better if not you should get away from what is worrying you for your health this was a deep poem for such few words SH

  • J Macabre gold member
    June 11

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    Oh man this one hit home...deeply for me. This write right here describes what i went through recently. 1st and 2nd lines and 7th and 8th were the ones that did it for me.