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B*i*t*c*h

I'm such a slut!
I can't believe I did those things!
I should ripe out my throat
Tear out my heart
And kill myself
These comments run throuh my mind
As I ready for school

finish later

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I'll finish when I get to school
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  • Cliche;
    over-dramatic.
    You should probably revise the whole thing.

    En sielua


    • Jazzlyn
      June 14
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      oki doki it's not really something I thought out tho... i just wrote it rushed but thanks for the comment

  • ...-sighs- Please..dont say this..

  • Ooooh you sayed bad words! And worse...you're talkin' smack about my baby sister.
    Gurlie. let me tell you something from personal experience. Everyone screws up. Everyone makes mistakes and no matter how bad you think you have screwed up, remember this.....You gotta let it go. I promise you that I've done stuff 20 times worse than what you have done just now and I'm okay. Guilt will kill you, if you let it. Honey, Chin up. It's going to be okay.

  • While the turtle crosses the road,
    The sun beats down on his humble aboad,
    Such heat draws sweat from his crown,
    Drawing on his weary face a frown,

    But what's there to be done?
    Stop in the middle of that beating sun?
    Lay there while life passes by,
    Just stifling a cry?

    But isn't there something across the highway,
    Shade it seems is right over that way,
    So let me ask you this dear,
    Do you move on? Or do you cower in selfmade fear?

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