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A Midnight Gaze...



I enjoy when you caress me like that
Your hands rolling over my head

I lay on your lap
As I gaze through the stars

I close my eyes...
For a walk down the memory lane

Your hair....drops in
As I move them away ... and see your face!!

I have been far yet so near...
Your eyes turn numb..as they begin the tear

I look into your eyes
And whoa!....I have just seen..what it means to be in heaven!!!!

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  • fathom me
    November 15
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    Please dont revise it :-)
    Loved, enjoyed reading it


  • HopelessScribbles gold member
    June 11

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    very nice to read, and to look out into the heavens , and look and realize it is all at the finger tips, thank you for sharing
    good luck
    Linda


  • bigtooth
    June 11

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    its so emotional....

    it brought a tear....sniff sniff
    "i have been far, yet so near".....
    and
    i have just seen...what it means to be in heaven..
    are my fav lines...!!!!!