Jupiter Wind

. .

Condescending blasphemers
cross lies to justify.

Scoffing philosophers
hasten the awakening.

Fermented grace bubbles

in weathered oak barrels.

Stars spiral and reel across the galaxy.

Cinderella danced with Cygnus
in this never ending tale, while
men fly their kite in a Jupiter wind?

. .

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Katilina
October 11

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Jupiters wayward winds blow into my sphere often. whimsical and forever changing and creating that which is...

I love the image of the kite.
wander of the sky
September 8
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this is cute
Nafrititi
August 16

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Electric and shiny
" Everyone is a star and has a right to shine." Marlin Manroe

Well whats your star.
The title is very nice.
The poem is eccentric and electric.

Kp it up and kp commenting

Rgds.
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Mr Jigs
June 19
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Great poem. Makes me think. Will add you as a fav.
Mr. Jigs
AngelBellerose
June 13

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I love your insight here
and the way you wrote this

Will Cinderella dance
I am not sure about that
but this poem sure did
awesome penned
Hugs Angel♥
itsman
June 11
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very interesting... great write
maralisa
June 11
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aw a wonderful write thank you for saringmaralisa
Random Goldfish
June 11

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I LOVE the title. That's a poem all on its own!
The poem has very interesting and beautiful imagery and has great vocabulary. I'd say this is a win!

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