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Extinguished

 

 

 

 

 

the sun shined 

crystalline rainbows

in your eyes

that day.

 

what god 

would to take you away?

 

my flame extinguished.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

20 words
prompt: invisible crown

A contest entry

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  • Dragonbabyx3
    June 12
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    This is sad, But I liked where you went with this prompt! Great write!


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    June 11

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    Brilliant thought for the prompt!
    All the best to you and good luck with it.




    Jeremy0826


  • Cerulean Sunrise
    June 11
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    tragically good

  • Susan E. Pennycuff
    June 10

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    I absolutely love that first stanza
    the imagery within it is brillant

    I wish you much luck in the contest

    Suzi


  • still.she.waits
    June 10
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    wow. fantastic take.
    good job, and good luck.


  • ShadowsMidnightRose
    June 10

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    A very different take on the prompt.

    I truly enjoyed reading your poem and the wording was stunning

    Well done

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