Lightning bolts shot through my being
Brain telling me no but body disagreeing
When you kissed my thighs
And I heard your sighs
Eyes rolled back into my head
I've never blushed this shade of red
Sweat trickles down my face
Growing impatient we speed up the pace
Clawing at your back wanting more
Heartbeats much faster than before
I'm screaming from the pleasure you gave
Closer now I can feel the wave
Of ultimate heaven, I want to stay
I tried to keep quiet but there was no way
Heavy breathing echos in the room
Our scent in the air a wondorous perfume
Cuddled up no intent of moving
Caressing my body I am approving
Sleep soon comes with no struggle
The rest of the night we just snuggle
Author notes
I was attempting the soft stuff...
**S T A R R E T T A**
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Damn, this was ohhhh sexy sexy sexy...
This was so sensual.
Very good
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I like this...alot...great imagery. great rhyme. keep up the great work!
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Wonderful imagery
Very good flow of words, nice and soft as you said. Well written.
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Builds up to a peak, just like what you're describing. Also interesting how you don't talk about missing anything in the body of the poem, you just describe what exactly you miss. I like it
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Good
A well writen way of describing what passionate lovers feel for each other. -
Wow, I really loved this. The timing was perfect, and the rhyming was great
I really like this line, "Lightning bolts shot through my being"
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sweeeet really sweet- lovely words and writing..
Lightning bolts shot through my being
Brain telling me no but body disagreeing
When you kissed my thighs
And I heard your sighs
Eyes rolled back into my head
I've never blushed this shade of red
luved it well done
xx
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Nice!! the ending is perfect
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A lovely story. I don't know a lot about such things but it is nice to imagine.
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nice!
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Memory lane has way of making us feel. Felt this one.
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great write! really enjoyed this!
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