Tainted heart bewildered by the dark temptation of love
Love is said to be the only way for a person to be truly understood
But I don’t understand this I just feel midstride
The only way to truly escape pain…
Fight the edge of that sharpened blade
This iron blade is my tainted spade …
My heart is taken….
And yet she says I am mistaken
Soul fueled by the deepening rage dwelling within me
Heart fighting pain that is incomparable…
How the Hell can you say my life is comparable?
My heart travelling through Hell’s mighty blaze
Blaze molting and my heart is sore
All that’s left of my heart is tore…
Ripped and shredded to the very core…
But I guess this is the reason to soar…
I will fight until I die
Hold my hands way up high
So why would I hide?
I will fight the tide,
And work my way to the top
I will never stop…
A contest entry
- Forever dreamer by sexy emo fairy.
700 points, ended June 12, 24 entries
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What do you think?
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no.
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why no?
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it's a great piece, but just not what we're looking for, and therefore you do not make it into the next round. sorry.
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lol oh okay I just saw the comment saying no lol I havent been online
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wow, this is so powerful. I could really feel the emotion off this peaice. the last two lines ended it off so nicely. thank you for entering!
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Wow deary, this wright is so powerful. Last two stanzas are so amazing, a brilliant way to describe how we gotta find the inner strength.
Way to write!
Nela
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Wow you really think so Nel? That is amazing maybe this song might be good enough!!!
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Yeah, I do! Definitely great!
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