This world teams with unfathomable life
inciting all to wonder and amazement
Humbling is my true insignificance
my tears are comical in their incompetance
Emotion is an invisable invader
inspiring creation and destruction
Blank page vainly seeking pride within
visual and auditory inticement
Daydreams of grandeur egotistical therapy
poisoning with sweet surrender
Only taunt my contemplation of importance
ask me how?
Why seek creation?
Why wonder, absorb and disperse?
I used to believe I could find approval
and with it strength
knowledge of my own worth,
I have found all of this and more.
Creation perfection in design
has inspired me
My life need not be justified
nor understood-
It only reguires
my acceptance.
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Another fantastic piece...
So full of imagery wrapped in a flowing narrative that enthrals as it compells your reader to read on...
Awesome as always...
Keep up the good work...
Well done!!!
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Your title speaks volumes
incomplete that is the feeling, not feeling quite whole.
so we search, but with our senses, suddenly we are more confused then ever.
we searched too hard and past by simplicity, we push and pull,.
when we find it we are stunned because we had it the whole time.
it isn't quite smooth sailing
but now we know how to drive.
It is about awareness and acceptance , ourselves, others and every morsel we have been given.
and you my friend have pointed to this beautifully
so very impressed.
love this
God bless you...
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Thank you so much for such an inciteful comment, it is nice to hear what thoughts transpire from my writing. I find inspiration in much of what you have said, and yes I will savour every morsel.
Thankyou again
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