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The Pauper

He looks into the window
dusty shelves
garment rolls
lapel jackets,
Long sleeves.

 

Memory
succeeds.
Days of copiousness...
The many needs.
Behind his back,
Society.

Delighted steps,
He took
toward
simplicity.

Like this

humbled deprivation...  
The caged soul is
never heard.
It left evidence of the willing
and the absurd.


Lone manikins
draped in evening wear,
Matching eyes unmoving stare.


He blended his memory
into the perfectly round
gold buttons
with silver thread.


Rationing last nights bread,

Remembering the day before
while looking ahead.



Pride lined the way
down ally's the storefronts,
The vacant lots
not missing...
What time had not.


Effulgence remained,
It was throned in the dark...


He owned

he didn't need to beg
borrow,
Or steal.

 

He just needed

to laugh and feel.

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  • Great write


    • campanaro silver member
      July 14
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      Thank you!!

      My friend,
      Thanks so very much and I appreciate
      you taking the time to stop by.
      Take care
      Love Peace
      campanaro

  • Deep with meaning! This poem makes on think.
    I think we all just need to laugh and feel.
    Great write! Pam

    • campanaro silver member
      June 22
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      Thank you

      very much my dear friend.
      It is nice of you to stop by and leave
      your kind thoughtful comments.
      Always appreciate them.
      Take care
      Love Peace
      campanaro


  • Arjita gupta
    June 18

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    Pride lined the way
    down ally's the storefronts,
    The vacant lots
    not missing...
    What time had not.

    The stanza has descriptive and vivd imagery lined which adds on to the intricacy and message of the poem..great write!


    • campanaro silver member
      June 19
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      Thanks so much!

      I appreciate you taking the time to stop by
      and for your thoughts and kindness.
      Take care
      Love Peace
      campanaro


  • Nicolette gold member
    June 11

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    A profound and poignant piece of writing, my friend. Simply loved the phrase "He owned"...yes, he knows that is important - just like you.



    ~ Nicolette

    • campanaro silver member
      June 11
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      Thank you so very very much!!

      Nicolette,
      I'm honored that your wisdom passed through here as always
      I appreciate that as well as your kindness.
      Thanks for your support my friend.
      Best
      Love Peace
      campanaro


  • Swangrnv gold member
    June 10

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    awesome write

    such deep and profound messages in this piece
    a very engaging and gripping journey into this 'life of a pauper'.. i'm so impressed my dear friend, you done good!

    • campanaro silver member
      June 10
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      Thanks so very much!

      I'm glad you enjoyed this write my friend
      Your kind comments are always appreciated
      Thanks for the support:~)
      Best
      Love Peace
      campanaro

  • Just4u
    June 10
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    It is not life that complicates man, it is man that complicates life...

    This line here shows the path to those seeking truth, unfortunately
    many will probably just glance over it, instead of seeing the deeper
    meaning that is there.

    Delighted steps,
    He took
    toward
    simplicity.

    It is only in the simplification where we finally find the complete...

    Hugs...Eddy

    • campanaro silver member
      June 10
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      Thank you!

      Nice comment here my friend...
      You are so very right as always:~)
      Your comments are appreciated.
      Best
      Love Peace
      campanaro

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