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My Eternal Love

You came in and changed my life completely
Now I can see clearly
You are the only one for me
I don’t need any other luxury.

I don’t need any other girl
You’re my angel, your voice soothes my soul
With you I want to start a small family
I wanna make you happy and live my life happily.

I’ll be by your side in everything you do
And you too know my love for you is true
I’m for you & you’re for me
And will always be eternally…

Author notes

Written : 3 December 2007 Monday, 5:22 PM
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This is a simple poem I wrote a while back ago, and maybe it would be my last poem of love

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  • zouzou1990
    August 11

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    i likes the last part of it best "I’m for you & you’re for me
    And will always be eternally…"
    i wish life was that simple as the last part claims it to be
    i read some more of your poems so far and i must say that i quite enjoyed a couple of them


  • mcope8050
    June 11

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    nice write

    a light hearted write and enjoyable read,,, thanks for sharing it,,,, have a wonderful day,,,, thanks again


  • kel dog
    June 10

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    this is a cute love poem you have here.
    this lve poem will never be your last love poem. always know that.

  • Why is this your last poem about love?

    This is really good! Great job!