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Leaving

Leaving with no warning
Preparing the fire
Slicing the numbnessng
Feeling the pain
Loving the feeling
Enjoying the rage
Walking around
Flaunting the deadness within
On with I thrive

But the decision
I can't live with

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  • GothicFyre
    June 10
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    It was dark and moody, very poignant. Great writing.