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Broken.

He is the desolate drifter,
who hides from the storm that is Love;
whose temper and squall
has divided us all,
to depths we cannot rise above.

Where darkness masks his face
in alleys of shade,
he hides from the very mess he’s made.


They assume him illusion,
or merely glare- the passers by
who smile or feign laughter with their traveller,
because they cannot bear to watch him die.


He is a nameless character-
the faint resemblance of a man
who had a shot at love,
misfired, and killed his second chance.


No room for idiosyncrasy;
just a case of, “he’s a no one.”
Let him be.
Modelling the clothes of the homeless-
he’s a threat to society.


He yearns to talk to her.
But a ten pence piece will gain no time,
in a telephone box
graffitied with the aching, of a broken line.

Author notes

Option 2- Homeless, Desolate, Storm, idiosyncratic, Shade, laughter, faint, Glare, character, Illusion.

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  • MeSsY-JeSsY
    June 14
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    This was a great poem.great choice words!u rock girl !keep rocking the pen lol

  • brilliant!!

    what talent you have to be able to take a word bank and create something so relevant and beautiful!!! nice job poet. great from start to finish. i really appreciate this one. good luck with the contest. peace and light always in ALL ways, kp

  • abu nuwas
    June 11

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    Well done!

    As so often, I didn't quite get it, but some excellent musings and lines. I feel the last line has to contain etching after aching, or something like that. And at the top, it is 'whose', when meaning 'of whom' and 'who's' when meaning 'who is'


  • Dragonbabyx3
    June 10

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    Wow! This had an amazing rhythm and flow to it! I absolutely loved the way you used the words in the word bank. That first stanza draws you end, captures you, until you cannot look away! You did an excellent job with this piece! Thankyou for entering my contest, and good luck!