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...My Love...

The many feelings,
Cascading thoughts, Plunder
Underneath uncontrolled Desire,
And love.

The many hardships endured,
All the stronger it makes us,
Wrapped in Tendrils of passion,
And love.

The moonlit nights,
When I call your name.
The candles are lit in ecstasy,
And love.

The deepest feelings!
For you I would die,
If it meant you would live,
And love.

In older age,
Our hearts still together,
We will hold each other’s hand,
And love.

‘Till death do us part?
No! How ‘bout this?
“I’ll see you again,
My Love…”

Author notes

I hope you like this... It is dedicated to my boyfriend Nick
We have been dating since March 17, 2007 and We are still the happiest couple I know... and I love him very Dearly...<3

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  • hisfallenangel821
    July 5

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    its amazing
    your last stanza was breathtaking to say the least it was indeed my favorite part and what hit me the most.


  • splinteroflight.
    June 19

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    <3<3<3!

    ‘Till death do us part?
    No! How ‘bout this?
    “I’ll see you again,
    My Love…”

    That last verse I loved!
    Incredible write, good luck
    <3<3<3


  • BlankCanvas500
    June 12
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    very sweet =] loved it. great flow, very powerful. very romantic. a great write =]


  • whitecoffee
    June 12

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    so nice! I wasn't sure how i would like the repetition, but I think it worked beautifully. This is a timeless piece. Much luck in the contest.


  • silent28mystery
    June 11
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    a very romantic notion, but very beautifully crafted


  • borrowing.moonlight gold member
    June 11

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    Wrapped in Tendrils of passion,
    And love.
    The candles are lit in ecstasy,
    And love.

    so so beautiful... every stanza is saturated with your love, which i can tell from reading this, is purely true love. i can relate as well. i have been dating my boyfriend john since february 2, 2008 and we still act like puppies. XD what a beautiful poem. thank you so much for sharing.


  • xXCaffeineAddictXx
    June 10

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    I like the poem it is very sweet and i know you love him by the words in the poem. I especially like the last stanza.

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