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Prince Charming: Nothing but a lie

Prince Charming, oh Prince Charming
Where could you possibly be?
I've looked high and I've searched low
Are you hiding from me?

Prince Charming, oh Prince Charming
I dream of a midnight's kiss
But you are neither here nor there
Your face I must have missed

Prince Charming, oh Prince Charming
You have found me alas!
But I have found unexpectedly
Prince Charming is just an ass





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  • LullabyOfADeadMan
    September 2
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    ahaha! great write, I'm definately in love with it!

    ~~Tay.


  • SkitzoSkittlez
    August 17

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    AMAZING!!!

    even though i was looking for love that works, this has been one of my favorites so far.. it's exactly how i feel about my guy!
    the last stanza is my favorite!!
    this is great poem..
    thank you so much for entering and best of luck in my contest!!
    <3<3<3
    SkitzoSkittlez


  • superbanana
    July 30
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    lol, I love these kind of mockery poems on a well known theme
    Good luck and thanks for entering


  • Kathraina silver member
    July 21

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    haha aw this piece is very humorous.
    And yet there is so much truth here. Many don't realize that prince charming isn't like Disney movies lol
    Fantastic job I thoroughly enjoyed this read.
    Bravo




    ♥ Kate

  • XxLoverOfDarknessxX
    July 16
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    lol loved this! I agree with your comment below, it is very creative. I loved the rhyme as well. WOW! NICELY DONE! keep up the good work! thanks for entering and good luck in my contest!


  • DarkAngel2013
    July 11
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    Nice job. Very creative.


  • Fallen-Thumper
    July 4
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    good luck and thanks for entering.
    reminds me of a few pwople. great write


  • happy kitty kat
    July 2

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    wow, sounds like my ex

    i really liked this poem and the seperation between stanzas was really neat. thanks 4 entering! good luck

  • kdom
    July 2
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    Hehe...I really liked the ending!


  • nobodys-girl
    July 1

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    haha ok this totally just won my heart! yes sadly, the prince is an ass. just like life. lovely job. thank you so much for entering my contest and best of luck!


  • mackereth
    June 26

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    I enjoyed how you ended this poem. At first I thought it was going to be another really sappy, lovey-dovey ending, but you twisted it around into a funny/hateful ending. I liked it. Well done.

  • XxLoverOfDarknessxX
    June 25
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    loved it! thsi was hilarious! keep up the good work! thanks for entering and good luck in my contest!

  • XxLoverOfDarknessxX
    June 25
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    lol i liked this. it was funny and i thought the rhyme was really fantastic. keep up the good work! thanks for entering and good luck in my contest!

  • XxLoverOfDarknessxX
    June 25

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    lol i liked this. it was funny and i thought the rhyme was really fantastic. keep up the good work! thanks for entering and good luck in my contest!


  • Heva Feva
    June 17

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    Very nice ending. So, so true. The guys that everybody wants are just ass holes anyway. Beautiful rhyming and it flows so well... Good luck and thanks for entering my contest!
    -heva


  • jezza15
    June 15
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    what is the *bunny*


  • jezza15
    June 15
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    what is the *bunny*


  • Jazzlyn
    June 12
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    lol this is funny great job

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