Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Before Hey


Some say "you had me at hello"
but you had me way before hey.
I mean,
I was yours...the second you looked at me that way.
Its just,
I don't know what else worthwhile,
that i could say.
I'd drop everything, leave it all,
To sweep you from those feet,
To take you away.
You startled me,
You, left me in awe,
You, so unique, so amazing,
Like never seen before.
Rendered me more than speechless,
But breathless
And...yes,
All in these precious few moments we shared,
You amazed me that way.
Some would say you had me at hello,
But i was yours before hey.

Author notes

A little twist on the old "you had me at hello" line.

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

  • Devilkid
    June 11
    Edit | Reply

    wow

    still love it awsome write boy xoxo marvelious