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Love was Never For all of Thee!.:c

we don't know love as it should be
not flowery words nor kisses on lips
but this i know would make me see
that love is not for all of thee

one is destined to win what's his
and one has fate to die for it
like love won't ever be for all of thee
but he who wins and take the key

for no matter how you fight for it
or no matter what you do for it
and no matter how you cheat your ways
no one can change the path you've made

Author notes

life was never fair.. that's what i've learned... love only brings... pain and...death

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  • Yes, I haveto agree with Gaylene on this.

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  • This is a beautiful poem. So sad. I am not too sure where is connects with the quote prompt though
    Gaylene