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The First Touch...!!!


You lay down in anticipation...as my fingers..slowly explore your soul...
Your white robes drop in...revealing...your sensuous body

Our lips join....as I feel your passion.....
You push me back.....as if in retaliation!

I hold you in my arms....you pull me closer....
Your lips...open up for me....
Your naked soul...yearns for my touch

A fire runs down your body...as you start to sweat
You tickle my lips..while your hands run wild...

The moment comes...when I push it in...
You hold me tight...as you start to moan...

This closeness...implores us...as we start to reach in for each other...
A long wait...has finally come to an end...

We become whole....as you whisper in my ears...
"You make me complete ...You make me love"

This one's special.....as its my first erotica!!!

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  • bigtooth
    June 10

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    U R SO horny...!!

    dear poet, i find this poem very arousing....!!!
    it made me horny....and iam very grateful to u for that,...........hihihi.!!!!!