She stands by your truck, knowing your inside
At that same sleazy motel where you’re hiding another
Jumbled thoughts tumble through her chaotic mind
As she fills up your emptied fuel tank from the back of the boot
Tears stream down her face as she slowly walks to the open door
Now she can see you as the other woman’s nails rake down your back
Her legs wrapped around your waist as you grunt out in pleasure
Cold liquid spills on the sheets, and on the bed horror on your faces
As you see the one you betrayed throwing fuel in all directions
Pure laughter and tears fall from her eyes as the tank drops to the floor
Screaming and shouting comes out of both your lips as she lights the lighter
As she walks out and dying from laughter she knows u figured out, that it’s only water….
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...As twisted vines we grow, confused, lost, abandoned, naught we know. But through time we see, the crest of the tree, and sunshine we do find. Though hold thus in mind; we travelled far, rough roads, to arrive where we are. Now supple light tempts, us further and hence; we have gained far more than that we had to begin, turned toil, to healthy soil. We grow much from within.
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Wow
And he shits his pants. But tis a two way street. Perhaps I should have tried this with my as she very often shared anothers bed. Lol But really I loved this poem. Dark and delicious poet. Happy writing.
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a good poem, well that is certainly one way to put fast fear into someone's heart and soul lol and much better than if it was gas. for then they would think, oh god thank you, it was water!
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Jeebus.... Not to be a cynic, but I'm gonna try this the next time a woman cheats on me... It was an amazing poem though... It brought you to the edge of the realities of infidelity and crimes of passion to overcome them...
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Glad you liked it and thanks for reading
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That is awesome. Very sadistic and humorous.
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hell if id caught them it would be petrol its my favourite weapon and so legally justifyable really enjoyed this full of tension and drams well done
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would be the best revenge though lol.
glad you liked it and thanks for the comment.
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That was pretty comical. Who'd thought she'd have a sense of humor about such a thing. This was a pretty original write.
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HA!!!!!!!!!! this was freaking awesome big sisshy. I totally need to do that sometime. Seriously. I think this is my new favorite write of yours
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I have no words... only laughter !!!
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glad u found it funny
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OMG Roflmao!!!
Okay I will straight up admit you had me completley fooled and thats because I forgot to read the title which is killer cool. any ways this is just a comical twisted writ eindeed and I sincerley doubt anyone coulda written it better than you. I really love the darkness built through out this poem because Lmao this is just creative and evil anyw ays a kick ass killer write and oddly my fav from ya probably because thats a diabolical idea that anyone caught in that probe position could do 
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Got it from BFMV's FIlm clip these tears dont fall, I liked the ending so much i wanted to write a poem about being betrayed and all that lol. Glad you liked it and found it funny
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