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His Concept of Desolation

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~Origami rhythm
folds within his soul.
Thundering horses
came before the rain.
Merry-Go-Round melodies
skip across the sea.
His concept of desolation
changed with the wind,
with the balance of the eagle.~

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • AngelBellerose gold member
    August 19

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    this is awesome mark
    the words the wisdom finds
    Like the wind beneath the eagle
    I see the wisdom well penned
    Hugs ♥


  • amaranthine lover gold member
    June 22
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    I really like this


  • Dark Geometry
    June 14
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    Now that's what I'm talkin about!

    Kick ass poem. Reminds me of my Chaos I write so much about. By the way, great song on your page.


  • itsman
    June 10
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    nice write good imagery.. good luck


  • maralisa silver member
    June 10
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    aw a wonderful write good luck inthe contestmaralisa


  • el dia
    June 10
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    I liked the words & the rhythm ....

  • SimplySonnets gold member
    June 10

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    An imaginative poem, the irony between Desolation, folded paper, with the beauty of "Thundering horses and balenced Eagles" inspiring,I liked this. well done, good luck.


  • perfectsunset gold member
    June 10

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    this was utterly BRILLIANT.
    I love this piece to pieces,
    this is definitely worthy
    of gold my friend


  • Black Narcissus gold member
    June 10
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    Luv it.

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